Help me please!!!

Does this sketch look like Kaori Miyazono. I am just asking about the face. Not the other parts of the body. Just tell me can you recognize that this sketch is of Kaori?  If not tell me what looks odd in it. What are the mistakes. I am about to paint it. This is just a rough sketch to paint on.

1st link - My rough sketch -

2nd link - Original image -

My sketch - 

Kaori Sketch

Original image. Please help me.

Kaori sad